lunes, 14 de abril de 2008

New life changes can make you go further

In our world there are many different kinds of personalities, between them we can find some people who love new changes in their lifes and they enjoy to experiment with that, but also there are those who prefer to keep with their lifes as the ussual.

In the first place, describing people who like to experience in life, they are characterized by having a very extrovert personality, they live every day without any fear and always expecting something more. Sometimes they are very risky on what they prove but to meet the unknown is more exciting and stonger on what many people could say.

On the contrary,many people prefer to maintain calmed the tide and to walk through the same route as always, well-known and safe. The idea to prove new things, from proving new meals, visit exotic places, to try a different way of thinking terrifies many people today.Since this kind of people doesn`t like very much new changes, they are often more quiet than others. As a matter of fact this persons are those who usually fall into some type of rutin, almost every day or every week do the same things or in an equal order, and if they see faced with something strange, undoubtedly they prefer to apply the same structure machine they were using till that moment.

From my perspective to keep the human mind active, creating new thoughts and new ways of living is one of the best exercises that human beings could do. Although one risks to lose while trying to meet the stranger, it is much possible to win in life, because it is a new experience, a new challenge added to the personal binnacle. I think those who risked and are launched with blindfolded lives without fear every day, thinking that there is always something more to discover, to invent something new, something new to enjoy, even if it does not cause them any pleasure.

Fortunately in the history of human beings have existed revolutionaries who have managed to change history and created a new evolution. However someone else could think that this human evolution has been an involution in other life aspects.

In spite of everything and of the multiples opinions that could be generated on the matter, I think that taking the initiative and given the first step in favour of any new opportunity is a ray of light for the spirit who counts with the energy enough to encourage the human body to discover..

1 comentario:

Miss dijo...

Geraldine,
ok not bad but there are a couple of important things in here. firstly,
too short for developing your ideas, then parallel structures i.e. you need to keep the same structure when you are giving examples, naming,etc. Thirdly, you forgot to develop and explain more about the calmed way oflife. Finally you gave your opinion in the end! this should be stated at the beginning.
more support and connectors ok?
regards
miss